Flowing ~~~River~~~

Apr 10 2008  | Views 339 |  Comments  (8)
Sitting on the river bank Watching the flowing river Far from every being & every... Expand

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  Geeta -Geets posted 3 mnths ago

thanks ......gud attempt hindi me translate karne ki......



  White Wings posted 3 mnths ago

nadi k kinaray baithay
behta pani dekh kar
har shor sharabay
har manush se door ho kar
main apnay dil ki dhun sunti hoon
lagata hai zinda rehti hoon
jaisy khusi se pani behta hai
apnay vicharon main behti hoon
jab halki si hawaa chalti hai
to dosray kinaray peron par
baithat parindon ki batain sunti hoon
jab suraj ki kirnay taron ko chooti hain
main hazaaron taron ko dekhti hoon
(kya din main handera ho gaya?)
meray paon jal ko chootay hain
meray sir ko thanda kar detay hain
chupchap pani dheeray dheeray
chaltay chaltay khushi k lehmay
mmeray jeevan main lay aata hai
nadi k kinaray baithay
maera dil khushi se bhar jaata hai



  Geeta -Geets posted 3 mnths ago

thanks priym....for enjoying the poem.



  priym posted 3 mnths ago

geeta, fantastic poem...........enjoyed every word....especially...her silence enlightened me....



  Geeta -Geets posted 3 mnths ago

thanks Muthuji....



  Geeta -Geets posted 3 mnths ago

thanks yashji........it was indeed refreshening experience visiting such place.



  Muthu Sundararajan posted 3 mnths ago

Geets !!

crystal clear water jaise......nice poem



  yash chhabra posted 3 mnths ago

Wow!!this is so beautiful and refreshening...Loved it...yash





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